Narrative Writing

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Welcome back. Today I will be showing you my narrative writing. Over the past few weeks we have been writing narratives, I will now show you mine.

“Umm Grandma Rose can you plug the maid in I want a snack” Said little 10 year old Lilly, “No lilly, you just have to get up and walk like 5 steps to get into the kitchen, you don’t need robots doing everything for you” Said Grandma Rose, “Uhh fine” said little Lilly. 

A few hours later.

“Grandma Rose can you tell me what it was like when you were 10,” said Lilly, “did you have and Iphone 20? Wait no a car? Or a room the size of a house?” asked Lilly, “ aha no Lilly I didn’t have any of those things when I was 10, but I did have an Ipod Touch, and a bike, and a room that could fit all the stuff I needed in it.” Said Grandma Rose, “oh” said Lilly “can I come back and see it Grandma Rose” said Lilly, “I have an idea Lilly, grab the teleporter that takes us to the supermarket and the tools in the shed, then meet me back here” Said Grandma Rose 

2 minutes later 

“Ok I have everything you asked for Grandma Rose” said Lilly, “Ok that's good let’s pull this apart and make a time machine” said Grandma Rose, “hey Grandma Rose isn’t your birthday coming up soon? Is it your 43” said Lilly. “Ah Lilly yes it is, it is on Sunday” said Grandma Rose, “OH NO YOU ARE GOING TO MISS YOUR BIRTHDAY!!!!” said Lilly, “Lilly don’t worry I am not going to miss it, haven’t you watched those time traveling movies it takes like a second in real life,” “oh that’s good, let's get started building this time machine,” said Lilly “that’s a good idea Lilly” said Grandma Rose.

Rose and Lilly start to build the time machine, they work for hours to make it right, when they finally think they have done it, they decide to check it by turning it on, but that doesn’t work they turn it on then it bursts up in smoke no flames just smoke, so then they go back to work and it takes hours upon hours to fix it and get it to work.

“Grandma Rose I don’t think we will ever be able to finish this” Said Lilly very tired sounding, “don't give up Lilly we can make this work” Said Grandma Rose.

 They kept working then eventually they feel asleep. Then they woke up in the morning and tested the time machine. When they tested it, it worked and they were thrilled!

“Grandma Rose, Grandma Rose, GRANDMA ROSE! It worked yay” said Lilly in an excited voice “Lilly you are right it did work this is great aha” Said Grandma Rose, I am so excited to see how you lived” said Lilly. “Lilly go and put some things into a SwagBag (I is what they call backpacks in 2052)” said Grandma Rose, “ok, Grandma Rose” said Lilly, “what should I bring, hmm this, no this, oh and this” (Lilly thinking to herself.)

“Ok Grandma Rose I am ready, let’s go!” said Lilly, “ok Lilly let’s get in this time machine” said Grandma Rose.

So Lilly and Rose hop in their self made time machine, they put in the date that they want to go back to, 28/8/2019, and then they clicked the big green button then….. Wow they were somewhere weird, somewhere new, “2019!!”said Grandma Rose. “We’re here, we’re here, WE’RE HERE!” Said Lilly, “ok Lilly let’s go and look at all of the places I would go at your age” said Grandma Rose. 

But suddenly they heard a loud noise that sounded a lot like a plane had crashed into a building. When they turned around they saw that the time machine was up in smokes and didn’t look like it would work to take them back!

So Rose and Lilly had to take to time machine to somewhere safe where no one would find it so they picked up the time machine and went on to find somewhere to put it, (the time machine is like a little round pad that they put on the ground then stand on, I know what you were thinking, back to the future and the delorean!)

“Hey, Grandma Rose look we can just fold the time machine up then put it in my swagbag” said Lilly, “smart idea Lilly” Said Grandma Rose, “ok lil-” Grandma Rose was saying as she was interrupted by Lilly, “Grandma Rose I thought you said you didn’t have ice capule bags!?” said Lilly confused, “we didn’t have ice capule bags… that is a plastic bag! Plastic bags were ruining our earth so they came up with ice capule bags instead” Said Grandma Rose, “hey Grandma Rose are you sure they didn’t duke you and just re-named the things you call plistic bags, what no you said plastic bags” Said Lilly, “OMG Lilly you are right! Wait that reminds me about all the other stuff we have now that is just remakes of stuff we already had, Lilly we have to stop this and get back to 2052” said Grandma Rose in a very concerned voice.

So Rose and Lilly went to find a warehouse so they could fix their time machine, it took them around 1 hour to fix the time machine, but once they finished they put it back down and then put in the date 28/8/2052 and headed back to fix the big problem that is ruining our earth.

“Grandma Rose do you think we can stop what you call global warming” said Lilly, “I don’t know if we can stop it Lilly but we can help to try and stop it” said Grandma Rose, “Lilly the first thing I think we should try and stop global warming by getting rid of air pollution, it is all that black stuff that you see in the air” said Grandma Rose, “Ok Grandma Rose,I learnt about all the pollution types at school in history class, so everyone obviously everyone thought that is was all gone!” Said Lilly, “Lilly let’s head to the factory’s to see if we can shut them all down and find all the workers jobs instead, let go Lilly” said Grandma Rose

Lilly and Rose got into their new and improved self driving car. They spent hours driving out into the country to get to the factory’s that produce a lot of smoke and air pollution, hours and hours go by, they fall asleep in the car. They wake up to the smell of…”Old rotting eggs, that’s what it smells like Grandma Rose” said Lilly, “your right Lilly, now let’s get back to business” said Grandma Rose.

“Lilly stay close to me, because I heard that they are now employing robots and I am not to sure how friendly they are when people walk-in at… WOW you should be in bed missy it’s 12:30!” said Grandma Rose, “ok Grandma Rose” said Lilly, so Lilly and Rose walked in and saw all of the robots making plastic bags and lots of stuff that uses in reusable plastic things. Rose and Lilly both went in and talked to the robots, they told them to go home and the robots agreed and left and they contacted the owners of the factory so they could make reusable bags and eco friendly packaging. “ ok, I will leave now bye human friends” said a worker Robot, “Grandma Rose can since you texted the owner of the company can we go and get in the car and go to sleep and go to our next place”said Lilly in a very sleepy voice, “ok Lilly, we don’t have to do much for trying to help stop sea pollution, I just have to contact the people who are already trying to clear the ocean to make them aware that the earth is getting worse, we just have to warn so let’s get in the car” said Grandma Rose.

Lilly is fast asleep in the car, but Grandma Rose is wide awake thinking about today, she thought there was no more problems with the earth, she thought they had fixed them all  

Lilly was fast asleep in the car, but Rose was wide awake, she was thinking about how she thought that our earth was safe, that we had to fix all the problems that were running our earth, but luckily Rose and Lilly were helping stop the problem, then she fall asleep.

“Ah, what a nice sleep, did you sleep good Grandma Rose” said Lilly, “yes I did Lilly” said Grandma Rose, “ok Grandma Rose, now what are we doing today saving animals, trees…?” Said Lilly, “well today I think that we should try and save all the animals that get their food from the ground, so we will” said Grandma Rose, “Grandma Rose won’t we need some tools to dig up the bad stuff” said Lilly, “your right, lets go to the hardware store and buy some tools” said Grandma Rose. So off Rose and Lilly went. Once they got to the hardware store they bought shovels and other gardening stuff, then they went out to where some chemicals get dumped and animals live. Once they get to their destination they started to dig up where all the nasty stuff was, while they were doing it they found a dead turtle, they wonder how in the world it got here, they realised it got hooked onto one of the barowls that was down by the ocean to be dumped but then came back to be dumped where they were.

“Aww Grandma that is so sad, why would people kill sweet innocent animals, like turtles” said Lilly, “yeah Lilly it is really sad but now we are helping to make a difference” said Grandma Rose. So Rose and Lilly keep digging, they were only digging up some of the soil today because on their GHM page (Go Help Me Page) they got lots of people that are going to dig up the top infected layers of dirt, they also had people cleaning the ocean because of their GHM page, so after a long day of work they got in the car and went back to their house, while they were in the car Rose put something new on there GHM page, talking about how the street lights we have are bad and ruining people's eyes and the lights aren't doing any good for the nocturnal animals.

So hours later when they finally got home they decided to have a good night sleep because they hadn’t had one of those in a while. The next day Lilly decided to get all of her friends together and with the approval of her Grandma Rose they went to the noise sound company and went and told the boss man that people are being to loud on purpose and that is killing the ears on our earth, and while Lilly was gone with her friends Rose was out contacting all the people she could to get all the street lights changed so you can see the stars and nocturnal animals will be happier, after Rose was done contacting everyone they all said the would look into and she was happy with that, so she went and picked up Lilly and they went into town and celebrated all of the stuff they had done for the earth in the last few days.

I hope you liked my narrative, What do you think will happen in the future?

But that's all for now.

BYEEEEEE